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What was the most thrilling thing you've ever done? Explain.

차진혁/2024-06-13

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I think the most thrilling thing is strike in bowling because it is very happy. And shoot the ball, getting the opposing team out in dodge ball is so cool. Also I shoot goal in soccer, it is very fun.
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Good evening again there, Jimmy!

Here's another revised composition for you. Do check out the few corrections given. Have a goodnight and see you this Friday! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                What was the most thrilling thing you've ever done? Explain.


I think the most thrilling thing is strike in bowling because it is very happy.
>> I think the most thrilling thing is getting a strike in bowling because it makes me happy. 

And shoot the ball, getting the opposing team out in dodge ball is so cool.
>> And dodging or catching the ball of the opposing team in dodgeball is so cool. 

Also I shoot goal in soccer, it is very fun.
>> Also, scoring a goal in soccer is very fun. 
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