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What do you think is the best job in the world? Explain.

차유진/2024-06-13

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I think the best job is a legal profession because they lead a peaceful world by law. Ther are punish criminals and help the victim.
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Hello again, Yale!

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                        What do you think is the best job in the world? Explain.


I think the best job is a legal profession because they lead a peaceful world by law.
>> OR: For me, the legal profession is the best because these professionals maintain peace in the country. 

Ther are punish criminals and help the victim.
>> They punish criminals and help victims. 
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