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homework 06.12

최 건/2024-06-12

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~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: English is widely spoken as a second language around the world. Why do you think so? Another name for English is we called the world's official language. Even in my country, students go to university or get a job at company through an English test. For similar reasons, many countries spoken as a second language the world. There are also reason why many countries use English. We knows, the beginning of English from British. And in the past, UK was strong and UK colonized many countries. So including U.S. and many countries use English their native language. As a result, now the U.S . influenced the world, English became more important. So learning English has became basic in many countries today.

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Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
English is widely spoken as a second language around the world. Why do you think so?

Another name for English is we called the world's official language.

>> English is also called as the world's official language.

Even in my country, students go to university or get a job at company through an English test.

>> Even in my country, if students want to go to the university or if people would apply for a job at a company, they need to pass an English test.

For similar reasons, many countries spoken as a second language the world.

>> For similar reasons, many countries speak English as their second language.

There are also reasons why many countries use English.

>> CORRECT!

We knows, the beginning of English from British.

>> As we all know, English is from Britain.

And in the past, the UK was strong and the UK colonized many countries.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In the past, the UK was so strong that it colonized many countries.

So including U.S. and many countries use English their native language.

>> So including the U.S. and many countries, they use English as their native language.

As a result, now the U.S . influenced the world, and English became more important.

>> CORRECT!

So learning English has became basic in many countries today.

>> So learning English has become a basic thing in many countries today.