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Which do you like better, magazines or newspapers?

이진태/2024-06-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If I want more detail for some field, the magazines is better than newspaper. Usually, magazines are telling about only one field, like a fashion or sports. so, magazines have more details. However newspaper is suitable for general purpose and are more formal than magazines.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey JT! Thank you for sharing your opinion about newspapers and magazines. I'm looking forward to hearing more of your opinion on this in our class.
~~Teacher Ryka^^


If I want more detail for some field, the magazines is better than newspaper.
>>If I want more detail in a specific field, magazines are better than newspapers. 

Usually, magazines are telling about only one field, like a fashion or sports. so, magazines have more details.
>>Usually, magazines focus on only one field, such as fashion or sports, so they provide more details. 

However newspaper is suitable for general purpose and are more formal than magazines.
>>However, newspapers are suitable for general purposes and are more formal than magazines.
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