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Is time management important? Why?

이진태/2024-06-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Time management is important especially at the work. We are always busy and we have not enough time, so we have to manage the time
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey JT! I would agree with you on this. Just like our topic before if you can manage your time well you can accomplish more.
~~Teacher Ryka^^

Time management is important especially at the work.
>>Time management is important, especially at work. 

We are always busy and we have not enough time, so we have to manage the time
>> We are always busy and don't have enough time, so we have to manage our time effectively.
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