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The cost of living for a month in seoul
고득호/2024-06-07
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Is the cost of living expensive in your country?
I think. Maby, It 's different the price according to the area in korea.
Seoul is very expencively city. And, area other than seoul is inexpencive.
And, The Gangnam area in seoul is very expencive.
Usually, Gangnam gu, Seocho gu , Songpa gu enter in Gangnam area.
The cost of living in seoul are divided into 3 parts.
First part is using inside my house, second part is using outside my house and third parts is traffic costs.
First part are rent expenses, eating everything, using in house.
Second part are lunch expenses, coffee and drink expenses.
Last part is traffic expenses.
Maby, The cost of living for a month in seoul is Total about $1,600.
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Thank you for this Sir Ko!
I think. Maby, It 's different the price according to the area in korea.
>>> I think the price is different depending on the area in Korea.
Seoul is very expencively city. And, area other than seoul is inexpencive.
Seoul is very expencively city. And, area other than seoul is inexpencive.
>>> Seoul is very expensive but other cities outside Seoul is inexpensive.
And, The Gangnam area in seoul is very expencive.
And, The Gangnam area in seoul is very expencive.
>>> Moreover, Gangnam area in Seoul is the most expensive.
Usually, Gangnam gu, Seocho gu , Songpa gu enter in Gangnam area.
Usually, Gangnam gu, Seocho gu , Songpa gu enter in Gangnam area.
>>> Gangnam gu, Seocho gu, and Songpa gu are within Gangnam area.
The cost of living in seoul are divided into 3 parts.
>>> The cost of living in Seoul are divided into 3 parts.
First part is using inside my house, second part is using outside my house and third parts is traffic costs.
>>> First part is used inside my house, second part is used outside my house and third parts is traffic costs.
>>> First part is used inside my house, second part is used outside my house and third parts is traffic costs.
First part are rent expenses, eating everything, using in house.
>>> First part are rent expenses, eating expenses, and everything used in the house.
>>> First part are rent expenses, eating expenses, and everything used in the house.
Second part are lunch expenses, coffee and drink expenses.
>>> correct
>>> correct
Last part is traffic expenses.
>>> correct
Maby, The cost of living for a month in seoul is Total about $1,600.
Maby, The cost of living for a month in seoul is Total about $1,600.
>>> Maybe the cost of living for a month in Seoul is around $1,600.
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