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How do you stay conscious of your health and well-being?

박소은/2024-06-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I try to stay my health work-out for 1 hour, three times a week. also, affort to avoid convenience food, eating some fresh foods like salads, fruits and tea.

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Hi Anna! :)

You're working hard on your health! Keep it up with those workouts three times a week, and choosing fresh foods like salads, fruits, and tea is a great way to stay healthy too.

~Kelly

I try to stay my health work-out for 1 hour, three times a week.

>> I try to work out for one hour three times a week to maintain my health.

also, affort to avoid convenience food, eating some fresh foods like salads, fruits and tea.

>> I also make an effort to avoid convenience foods and instead opt for fresh foods such as salads, fruits, and tea.