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정일환/2024-06-05

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Q : Can you name three jobs you can be good at? A : First of all, I can do well in planning work. And I can be good at sales and teaching someone. Q : What factors influence a career choice? A : First of all, work and life should be balanced, and secondly, the salary should be high.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Steve!

Thank you for sharing your strengths and priorities. I agree that work-life balance is crucial, and competitive compensation is important.

~ Teacher Maxine

First of all, I can do well in planning work. And I can be good at sales and teaching someone.

>> CORRECT

OR >> First of all, I excel in planning work, and I have strong abilities in sales and teaching.

First of all, work and life should be balanced, and secondly, the salary should be high.

>> CORRECT

OR >> First of all, I believe in maintaining a balance between work and life, and I also prioritize competitive compensation. These factors are essential for me when considering any opportunity.