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What was the last great news you've heard on TV or the internet? Write a little about it.
이진태/2024-06-04
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I heard a little surprising news yesterday.
Korea don't have any natural resources like a gas. however Korea goverments announced they found the gas.
Even we need more investigate, anyway it's a good news for Korea.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi JT! Wow! This is surprising news. I'd love to hear about this more in our class. I hope you can give me more detail about this news.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I heard a little surprising news yesterday.
>>I heard some surprising news yesterday.
Korea don't have any natural resources like a gas. however Korea goverments announced they found the gas.
Korea don't have any natural resources like a gas. however Korea goverments announced they found the gas.
>>Korea doesn't have any natural resources like gas; however, the Korean government announced they found gas.
Even we need more investigate, anyway it's a good news for Korea.
Even we need more investigate, anyway it's a good news for Korea.
>>Although more investigation is needed, it's good news for Korea.
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