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What is the best age to be and why?
이진태/2024-06-04
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I wanted I will be a early thirtys since I was university stundents.
Because, I don't like uncertainty of the future. and I don't have enough money. so I wanted be a thirtys.
Early thirtys is still young and they have money. so I thought early thirtys is best age of the life.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey JT! It would be nice to hear more about your thoughts on being in your thirties. I hope we get to talk about it in class.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I wanted I will be a early thirtys since I was university stundents.
>>I wanted to be in my early thirties since I was a university student.
Because, I don't like uncertainty of the future. and I don't have enough money. so I wanted be a thirtys.
>>This is because I don't like the uncertainty of the future and I didn't have enough money, so I wanted to be in my thirties.
Early thirtys is still young and they have money. so I thought early thirtys is best age of the life.
Because, I don't like uncertainty of the future. and I don't have enough money. so I wanted be a thirtys.
>>This is because I don't like the uncertainty of the future and I didn't have enough money, so I wanted to be in my thirties.
Early thirtys is still young and they have money. so I thought early thirtys is best age of the life.
>>Early thirties is still young, and people usually have more money. I thought the early thirties is the best age of life.
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