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Writing task: Use the following words in sentences: 1. suggested 2. idealistic 3. realistic

황성은/2024-06-04

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1. Please follow the suggested instruction. 2.The idea is too idealistic. It doesn't match with the reality. 3. The artist is famous for his realistic capture of the world.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good afternoon Hwang Seong Eun!

Thank you for being diligent in doing your homework. Keep it up!

1. Please follow the suggested instruction.

>> Correct

OR: Please follow the suggested instructions.

2.The idea is too idealistic. It doesn't match with the reality.

>> Correct

OR:

>> The idea is too idealistic and doesn't align with reality.

3. The artist is famous for his realistic capture of the world.

>> Correct

OR:

>> The artist is renowned for his realistic depiction of the world.