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The most valuable lesson from past challenges

양기연/2024-06-04

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

From the past challenges, I have learned that every challenge strengthens me and is an important turning point. So whenever I face some challenges or difficulties, I try to keep optimistic attitudes.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Gi Yean!

I couldn't agree more! It's important to look at challenges in a positive light so that we can be more motivated and push forward.

- T. Caitlyn

From the past challenges, I have learned that every challenge strengthens me and is an important turning point.

>> CORRECT

So whenever I face some challenges or difficulties, I try to keep optimistic attitudes.

>> So whenever I face challenges or difficulties, I try to maintain an optimistic attitude.