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Potential benefits of hiring foreign-liscensed doctors

양기연/2024-05-31

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I have never thought about that case. But if the policy is implemented, the months-long strike of doctors will have a sign of resolution. Recently most hospitals have severe problems due to the doctors' strike. And I think Korean medical system is stable enough to open to foreign doctors.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Gi Yean!
Definitely! Hiring foreign doctors might make striking or resigned doctors realize that the government is serious about its decision to increase the number of doctors in hospitals, no matter what.
- T. Caitlyn
I have never thought about that case. 
>> CORRECT
But if the policy is implemented, the months-long strike of doctors will have a sign of resolution. 
>> But if the policy is implemented, it will signal a resolution to the months-long strike of doctors.
Recently most hospitals have severe problems due to the doctors' strike. 
>> CORRECT
And I think Korean medical system is stable enough to open to foreign doctors.
>> CORRECT
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