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Secondhand smoke

이준규/2024-05-31

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
What do you know about secondhand smoke? Secondhand smoke is not good for health. Aside from this, I don't know well about secondhand smoke.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Jun Kyu! Great job! Thank you for completing the homework. Secondhand smoke indeed harms health. If you'd like, I can provide more information on the topic. Just let me know! By the way, your answer is grammatically correct, but it could be improved for clarity and completeness. Here's a revised version:

^^ T. Arah

Secondhand smoke is not good for health. 
>>> Secondhand smoke is harmful to health.
Aside from this, I don't know well about secondhand smoke.
>>> Besides this, I don't know much about secondhand smoke.
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