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What songs or music would you like to fall asleep to?

박소은/2024-05-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I want to fall asleep with an classic music because the classic music makes me sleepy. Also I want to fall asleep with an idol song because I like idol song so I think I can fall asleep more good.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sunny!
You did an outstanding job today.
The corrections were really minor.
You used correct terms and expressions.
You did a really good job.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I want to fall asleep with an classic music because the classic music makes me sleepy.

>> I want to fall asleep with classical music on because it makes me sleepy.
Also I want to fall asleep with an idol song because I like idol song so I think I can fall asleep more good.

>> I also like to fall asleep to idol songs because they make me sleep better.