What do you think of rainforests?
/2024-05-23
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I think rainforests are very hot and humid.
But rainforests are beautiful and cool, because sunset is very nice.
I think rainforests is mysterious, so I want to go to the rainforests in the future.
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Here's another edited essay, Jimmy! Please note how I removed the comma before the word "because". You don't need a comma in that sentence. Also, take note of how I changed the expression "I think" to "I believe". They are similar so you can use them interchangeably. Have a good night there and see you tomorrow!
Cheers,
Jean~~
What do you think of rainforests?
I think rainforests are very hot and humid.
>> CORRECT~~
But rainforests are beautiful and cool, because sunset is very nice.
>> But rainforests are beautiful and cool because the sunset is very nice.
I think rainforests is mysterious, so I want to go to the rainforests in the future.
>> I believe rainforests are mysterious so I want to go to some of them in the future.