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최윤성/2024-05-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Sun because sun is making energy so we can see objects.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Eric!

Thank you for your homework!

T. DON

Sun because sun is making energy so we can see objects.

>> I will choose sun because it gives us energy and light to see the things around us.