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박혜연/2024-05-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think this words can make many sentences. I’m going to try it. I run when i have with my cousin sister. My mug-cup is very strong!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hye Yeon! Great job! Keep practicing like this. I can see how much you'll improve as the days go by.

~ T. Jenna

I think this words can make many sentences.

>> I think many of these words can be used /put together to make sentences.

I’m going to try it.

Correct, or

>>I'll give it a try.

I run when i have with my cousin sister.

>>I run when I am with my female cousin.

My mug-cup is very strong!

>> My mug is very strong!