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Spend time with people of similar level of education

양기연/2024-05-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I have made friends with some people with various levels of education. I don't mind the education background when I make friends with someone. In the second house, I have had a good relationship with my neighbors, who didn't graduate from college or university and work at a factory or supermarket. Through them, I have learned some knowledge and skills about gardening, cooking, and farming.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Gi Yean!

You are right! Sometimes we can learn more from people who have a different educational level than us. We often refer to practical knowledge gained from life experiences as "street smarts", which is different from the theoretical knowledge acquired through formal education, known as "book smarts".

- T. Caitlyn

I have made friends with some people with various levels of education.

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I don't mind the education background when I make friends with someone.

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In the second house, I have had a good relationship with my neighbors, who didn't graduate from college or university and work at a factory or supermarket.

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Through them, I have learned some knowledge and skills about gardening, cooking, and farming

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