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류건우/2024-05-20

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Q: What is an ideal neighbor? A: I think an ideal neighbor is quiet and kind neighbor. I think if my neighbor interferes with me too much, then it would be burdensome to me. Also, if my neighbor is loud, it would disturb me a lot.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think an ideal neighbor is quiet and kind neighbor.

>>I think an ideal neighbor is a quiet and kind neighbor.

2. I think if my neighbor interferes with me too much, then it would be burdensome to me.

>>I think that if my neighbor interferes with me too much, then it would be burdensome for me.

3. Also, if my neighbor is loud, it would disturb me a lot.

>>CORRECT!