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Do you think it is possible to love everyone?

김영순/2024-05-18

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I think, it's impossible to do. People are just trying to be interested each other. People live with many different feelings However,God loves everyone.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Young Soon!
Thank you for the effort of writing about something new.
It's good for us to stretch our imagination once in a while.
You did great overall.
You were able to grasp the question well and you did your best to answer.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I think, it's impossible to do.

>> I think it's impossible to do that.
People are just trying to be interested each other.

>> People are just trying to be interested in each other.
People live with many different feelings.

>> Correct
However,God loves everyone.

>> However, God loves everyone.