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In your own opinion, why do you think some people don't like performing on stage?

박준현/2024-05-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think some people hate on the stage. They hate the stage because they are the musicals hate people. Those people are the they don't like any musicals like me. In your country, there is a musical hate peoples? These are the reasons why I think some people hate on the stage.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille


I think some people hate on the stage.
>> I think some people hate being on the stage.
They hate the stage because they are the musicals hate people.
>> They hate the stage because they are the people who also hate musicals.
Those people are the they don't like any musicals like me.
>> Those are the people who don't like any musicals like me.
In your country, there is a musical hate peoples?
>> In your country, are there people who hate musicals?
These are the reasons why I think some people hate on the stage.
>> These are the reasons why I think some people hate being on the stage.

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