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What types of leisure activities are popular in your country?

김일환/2024-05-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Many people go camping for the leisure . There are so many camping shops and camping places in Korea. Also, there are many TV shows about camping. My younger brother also has gone camping regulraly. But I can't not understand how camping could be a leisure activitiy. I should prepare all meals in camping. After camping, I should repair all camping tools. It is a lot of losses compared to gainning.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hwanny!

Typically, people leave developed areas to spend time outdoors, in pursuit of activities providing them enjoyment or in a form of educational experience. I guess, they find happiness and comfort with everything they do there. ^^

~ Trixia

Content:

Many people go camping for the leisure .

- Many people go camping for leisure.

There are so many camping shops and camping places in Korea.

- CORRECT.

Also, there are many TV shows about camping.

- CORRECT.

My younger brother also has gone camping regulraly.

- My younger brother has also gone camping regularly.

But I can't not understand how camping could be a leisure activitiy.

- But I can't understand how camping could be a leisure activity.

I should prepare all meals in camping.

- I should prepare all meals while camping.

After camping, I should repair all camping tools.

- After camping, I should repair all my camping tools.

It is a lot of losses compared to gainning.

- It is a lot of losses compared to gains.