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류건우/2024-05-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: Do you easily believe when a celebrity/influencer endorses a product? Why or why not? A: I don't really believe them that much, They are advertising those products because they are payed, so they might not be straight about the product. So I usually read the reviews of the product.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I don't really believe them that much,
>>I don't really believe them that much.

2. They are advertising those products because they are payed, so they might not be straight about the product.
>>They are advertising those products because they are paid, so they might not be straight about the product.

3. So I usually read the reviews of the product.
>>So, I usually prefer to read the reviews of the product.

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