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The disappointing thing in the trip

양기연/2024-05-08

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I hated the leers of men looking at my daughters and niece when we were going around or buying something in local markets.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Gi Yean!
It's saddening to hear about the experience you had. This really shows how countries differ from each other, and such things are not considered as harassment in Malaysia.
- T. Caitlyn
I hated the leers of men looking at my daughters and niece when we were going around or buying something in local markets.
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