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류건우/2024-05-07

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Q: What would happen if you lived with your extended family? A: I think not a lot of things would have been different. Even if we say we're all in one family, we might live in separated space, and live in separated ways. So, I think just the amount of dishes and chores would be the biggest change.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think not a lot of things would have been different.
>>CORRECT!

2. Even if we say we're all in one family, we might live in separated space, and live in separated ways.
>>Even if we say we're all in one family, we might have lived in separate spaces, and lived in separate ways.

3. So, I think just the amount of dishes and chores would be the biggest change.
>>So, I think only the number of dishes and chores would be the biggest change.

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