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What are the most important things in a job for you? (list your top 3)

오서현/2024-05-07

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The First is warlabel. Because it’s important to rest. The second is a pay. If i earn less money i feel sad. And last is how well the people work with me.
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Thank you for this Seo Hyeon!

The First is warlabel. Because it’s important to rest.
>>> The first is work-life balance because it’s important to rest.
The second is a pay. 
>>> The second is the pay. 
If i earn less money i feel sad.
>>> If I earn less money, I would feel sad.
And last is how well the people work with me.
>>> correct
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