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Does it bother you that people gamble on sporting events?

김병욱/2024-05-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
No i don't think so. I just enjoy watch sports game. I think gamble is very addictive. so i don't like that
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Dan,
I have to concur with your observation. When a hobby, such as watching and enjoying sports, becomes entangled with gambling, it can diminish satisfaction. Merely watching no longer provides the same thrill and excitement; there's an expectation of a return after investing time in a particular sport.
T. Aki~

No i don't think so.
>> CORRECT!

I just enjoy watch sports game.
>>> I just enjoy watching sport game.

I think gamble is very addictive. so i don't like that
>>> I think gambling is very addictive and I dont like that.
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