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Should women play basketball?

김병욱/2024-05-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I don't know what to say. because i can rarely see women play bakset ball in korea. Someone said, If you everyday play basketball, everyday drink some milk, you will soon bigger than before.
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Hi there, Dan!
I think it depends then on one's country. There are many women in the west that are oterested in plaaying basketball especially tall girls. 
Some would advice them if they can't join, modeling, they have to do sports n order for them to get "credit" from being tall.
That is how our society is shaping people.
T. Aki~

I don't know what to say. because i can rarely see women play bakset ball in korea.
 >>> I'm at a loss for words. In Korea, it's rare to see women playing basketball.

Someone said, If you everyday play basketball, everyday drink some milk, you will soon bigger than before.
>>> Someone once told me, 'If you play basketball every day and drink milk every day, you'll soon grow bigger than before
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