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김순님/2024-05-07

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I think more and more wear clothes people can be fashionable. With 1 upper and 1 bottom clothes can be fashionable in summer. But people wear an overcoat and more clothing in winter. So it’s not easy to match clothing in winter. Because we have to adjust harmony upper and bottom’s thickness or material as well as its color.
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Ms. Sunny,
It is how you carry yourself :) Be confident every day.
T. Aki~

I think more and more wear clothes people can be fashionable.
>>> I think that nowadays, people can show their fashion sense through the clothes they wear.

With 1 upper and 1 bottom clothes can be fashionable in summer.
>>> With upper and bottom clothes, one can be fashionable in summer.
 
But people wear an overcoat and more clothing in winter.
>>> CORRECT!

So it’s not easy to match clothing in winter.
>>> CORRECT!

Because we have to adjust harmony upper and bottom’s thickness or material as well as its color.
>>> Because we have to blend the upper and bottom thickness, material, and color.
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