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김순님/2024-05-02

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I think wearing purple is difficult to match other clothes so it feels artificial and groomly. Orange is neon light people who is going on a trip they like to appeal their enjoyment. Red means cooperation and strong willings. They wear it to pray their wish.sometimes the aim can be for a country or a team. I think beautiful is wearing natural color not standing out. I preper wearing down toned color. We call it dead color. It feels calm and gorgeous.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi there, Ms. Sunny!
Gee, thank you for expanding your thought by giving your answers in detail. You know in my case, I love any shades of beige. But wearing almost the same color every day will catch the attention of many people.
Have a good day!
Aki~

I think wearing purple is difficult to match other clothes so it feels artificial and groomly.
>>> I think wearing purple makes it difficult to match other clothes so it feels artificial and groomly.
>> I find it challenging to match purple with other clothes, which makes it look artificial and awkward

Orange is neon light people who is going on a trip they like to appeal their enjoyment.
>>> Orange is a neon light for people who are going on a trip they like to appeal to their enjoyment.

Red means cooperation and strong willing.
>>> Red means cooperation and strong willingness.

They wear it to pray their wish.sometimes the aim can be for a country or a team.
>>> They wear it to pray for their wish. sometimes the aim can be for a country or a team.

I think beautiful is wearing natural color not standing out.
>>> I think being beautiful is wearing natural colors not standing out.

I preper wearing down toned color.
>>> I prefer wearing down toned color.
 
We call it dead color. It feels calm and gorgeous.
>>> CORRECT!
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