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박혜연/2024-05-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I always sleep good. But i choice one of them, My best sleeping is to appear the favorite characters at my dream. I also ate a tea with them.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey there Hye Yeon! That sounds fun! Dreaming about favorite characters and having tea with them must be cool. Enjoy your good sleep!

~T. Jenna

I always sleep good.

Correct, or

>>I always sleep well.

>>I always sleep soundly.

>> I always get good sleep.

But i choice one of them, My best sleeping is to appear the favorite characters at my dream.

>>But If I had to choose the best; that's when my favorite characters appeared in my dreams.

I also ate a tea with them.

>>In that dream, I even drank tea with them.