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Do you like playing in the sand?

박준현/2024-05-01

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
It's half in hlaf. It 's half in half because I sometimes want to play, and sometimes I don't want to play. I haven't make a sand castles. But I made a sand fild. What do made when you are child? These are the reasons why I half in half playing in the sand.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille

It's half in hlaf.
>> It's half and half.
It's half in half because I sometimes want to play, and sometimes I don't want to play.
>> It's half and half because I sometimes want to play, but sometimes, I don't.
I haven't make a sand castles.
>> I haven't tried making sand castles.
But I made a sand fild.
>> But I have made a sand field.
What do made when you are child?
>>  What have you tried making when you were a child?
These are the reasons why I half in half playing in the sand.
>> These are the reasons why I somewhat like playing in the sand.

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