Can we meet at 5pm on this Saturday for Jane's birthday? How does meeting 3 days later sound to you? Would it be possible to arrange another time like 8pm instead of 6pm?

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Can we meet at 5pm on this Saturday for Jane's birthday?

>> Correct!
OR: Can we get together this Saturday at 5 p.m. to celebrate Jane's birthday?

How does meeting 3 days later sound to you?

>> How does meeting three days later sound to you?
OR: Would you be open to meeting three days later?

Would it be possible to arrange another time like 8pm instead of 6pm?

>> Correct!
OR: Would it be possible to schedule another time, such as 8 p.m. instead of 6 p.m.