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김순님/2024-05-01

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I will miss the kimch first and soybean paste stew second. Luckly most hotel in Southeast Asia offer the kimch as a breakfast buffet. But I like eating western style food. So I don’t care if there isn’t a Korean food on the table. Thesedays young generation who likes kimchi is decreasing.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Ms. Sunny!
We need to train our tongues to enjoy food aside from what we used to eat in our native land. In this way, we won't be bothered and it won't ruin our trip just because we couldn't find a restaurant that will meet our palate. Good thing, that most countries offer international cuisines that cater to every foreign nationality that visits their countries.
Enjoy the day
Aki

I will miss the kimch first and soybean paste stew second.
>>> I will miss kimchi first and the soybean paste stew second.

Luckly most hotel in Southeast Asia offer the kimch as a breakfast buffet.
>>> Luckily most hotels in Southeast Asia offer the kimch as a breakfast buffet.

But I like eating Western style food.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> I also enjoy eating Western cuisine.

So I don’t care if there isn’t a Korean food on the table.
>>> So I don’t care if there isn’t any Korean food on the table.

These days young generation who likes kimchi is decreasing.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> The number of young people who enjoy eating kimchi has been decreasing in recent times.
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