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What are the advantages of having a big family?

차유진/2024-04-30

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I like big family have a lot of people. Big family don't have to spend long time to go to grandparents's house It's good to have a lot of people to talk together.
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I like big family have a lot of people.
>> I like big families because they have a lot of people. 

Big family don't have to spend long time to go to grandparents's house
>> Big families don't have to spend a long time going to their grandparents' home. 

It's good to have a lot of people to talk together.
>> It's good to have a lot of people to talk to. 
>> OR: I think talking together with a lot of people feels good. 
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