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What do you think of the rainy season? How do you feel when it rains.

차진혁/2024-04-30

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I hate the rainy season, because I don't like the feeling of wet and sticky. And it's uncomfortable to bring my umbrela. But I love to hear raindrops inside.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good evening, Jimmy!

Here's your corrected composition. Many thanks for sending it. 
Also, please check the alternative sentences and expressions, and corrections below. See you tomorrow! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                     What do you think of the rainy season? How do you feel when it rains?


I hate the rainy season, because I don't like the feeling of wet and sticky.
>> I hate the rainy season because I don't like the feeling of getting wet and sticky.
>> OR: I hate the rainy season because I don't like getting wet and sweaty. 

And it's uncomfortable to bring my umbrela.
>> And it's uncomfortable to bring my umbrella. 
>> OR: Also, it's bothersome to bring an umbrella when I go out. 

But I love to hear raindrops inside.
>> But I love to hear the sound of raindrops or the rain inside.

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