Thank you Gemma! Your wise advice always inspires me. I wish you have great day!

Good day Diego! ^^ Something special awaits you each day. All you need is to recognize it and make the most of it. Have a positive attitude throughout the day and then that today is going to be the best day of your life! See you! ^^

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

 Some people believe the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be beneficial to society.  Others say the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

I believe both point of views about education are all correct and acceptable.

>>> CORRECT~!^^

We can expect contribution in society and personal success.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Education can generate holistic human who can develop society in various area. 

>>> CORRECT~!^^

Their talents can be found through education. 

>>> CORRECT~!^^
By developing one's skills and ability, whole society earns benefits. 

>>> CORRECT~!^^

Education occurs desirable competition that can provide fair opportunity.

>>> CORRECT~!^^
However, we must not forget, education is not be only used as tools to maintain society.

>>> However, we must not forget, education shouldn't only be used as a tool to maintain society.

 If there is no consideration about personal desire, that can lead society to totalitarianism.

>>> CORRECT~!^^

The negative effects of totalitarianism never accepts minorities' opinions which can provide chance to solve problems in society such as human rights, environment issues and expressions of liberties.

>>> CORRECT~!^^
There is no reason to suppress one's desire to success.

>>> CORRECT~!^^

 Education should support one's career and dreams.

>>> CORRECT~!^^

Once the individual values harmonized with society's importance, both individual and society can flourish and help each other. 

>>> CORRECT~!^^

Society should encourage desirable competition and equal opportunities to achieve one's goals. 

>>> CORRECT~!^^

Education is excellent method to contribute to both society and individuals.

>>> CORRECT~!^^