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임유진/2024-04-25

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1. combination Final cuisine is decided by the combinations of ingredients, creating unexpected flavor. 2. pharmacy We should go to specialized hospital to solve fundamental preoblems as well as go to pharmacy to relieve early pain. 3. suitable It is needed to prepare suitable options (diet, working out) by health conditions and apply instantly.
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Hey, Ms. Yu Jin! Your sentences are very meaningful. Thank you for sparing some time to omplete this task. 
~T. Jenna


1. combination
Final cuisine is decided by the combinations of ingredients, creating unexpected flavor.
>>The final cuisine is decided by the combinations of ingredients, creating an unexpected flavor / unexpected flavors.
OR
>>Exquisite culinary experiences emerge from the harmonious combination of ingredients, yielding delightful and unexpected flavors.
2. pharmacy
We should go to specialized hospital to solve fundamental preoblems as well as go to pharmacy to relieve early pain.
>>We should go to a specialized hospital to solve fundamental problems as well as to the pharmacy to relieve early pain.
OR
>>We should seek treatment at a specialized hospital to address underlying issues comprehensively, and also visit the pharmacy for immediate relief from any initial pain.
3. suitable
It is needed to prepare suitable options (diet, working out) by health conditions and apply instantly.
>>It is necessary to prepare suitable options (diet, exercise) based on health conditions and apply them instantly/promptly.
OR
>>Tailoring appropriate options (such as diet and exercise) based on individual health conditions is essential and should be implemented promptly.
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