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~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: What could be the reasons why some siblings end up having a bad blood with each other? Sometimes, we want to live a rich life. Because they seems to live a wealth life, they seems don't have any problems and worries about money. But, there is no big difference between people's life. And also rich people have pain in their life just like others too. It means, I think the most common beef about something is a money problem, a financial, and legacy inheritance between siblings . Most people's greed has no limits. Because, whether we have a lot or a little, we want to have more. In old Korea, we had prefers sons over daughters culture. So, until the my parents' generation, only first son was given a inheritance. But, rest of the son and daughters didn't receive it. So the beef between the brothers became worse. Sometimes the most common case I watched on the another country's news is the inheritance problem.
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Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What could be the reasons why some siblings end up having a bad blood with each other?


Sometimes, we want to live a rich life.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Sometimes, we want to live a wealthy life.
Because they seems to live a wealth life, they seems don't have any problems and worries about money.
>> That's because they seem to live a wealthy life, they don't have any problems and worries about money.
But, there is no big difference between people's life.
>> But, there is no big difference between people's lives.
And also rich people have pain in their life just like others, too.
>> And also, rich people have pain in their lives just like others, too.
It means, I think the most common beef about something is a money problem, a financial, and legacy inheritance between siblings.
>> It means, I think the most common beef about something is money or finances, and legacy inheritance between siblings.
Most people's greed has no limits.
>> CORRECT!
Because, whether we have a lot or a little, we want to have more.
>> CORRECT!
In old Korea, we had prefers sons over daughters culture.
>> In old Korea, we used to prefer sons over daughters in our culture.
So, until the my parents' generation, only first son was given a inheritance.
>> So, until the my parents' generation, only the first son was given an inheritance.
But, rest of the son and daughters didn't receive it.
>> But, the rest of the sons and daughters don't receive anything.
So the beef between the brothers became worse.
>> CORRECT!
Sometimes the most common case I watched on the another country's news is the inheritance problem.
>> CORRECT!