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How do you like your career?

김일환/2024-04-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I have been a software engineer for eighteen years. Being a software engineer isn't easy. I have had improving my skills last eighteen years. Sometimes I tried to give up being a software enigneer, but I didn't. There is one thing that I am disappointing. When I didn't move to bigger companies than before. My company has a software engineer. That is me. When I make a decision, it's very difficult.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hwanny!

Good to hear from you! Being the only engineer in your company must have been difficult, but think positive! You may have accomplished impossible projects before, though you're the only engineer in your company.

~ Trixia

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I have been a software engineer for eighteen years.

- CORRECT.

Being a software engineer isn't easy.

- CORRECT.

I have had improving my skills last eighteen years.

- I have been improving my skills for the last eighteen years.

Sometimes I tried to give up being a software enigneer, but I didn't.

- Sometimes I tried to give up being a software engineer, but I didn't.

There is one thing that I am disappointing.

- There is one thing that I am disappointed in.

When I didn't move to bigger companies than before.

- I didn't move to bigger companies than before.

My company has a software engineer.

- CORRECT.

That is me.

- That is me.

When I make a decision, it's very difficult.

- CORRECT.