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What major change would you like to make to your ?

박소은/2024-04-16

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I want to change in my personality that I have angre. It's becasue I dont like angre.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sunny!
You tried out many patterns here.
Keep doing that because it's really good practice.
I taught you some new words today.
Try to remember and always use those expressions.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I want to change in my personality that I have angre.

>> I want to change my personality of having a bad temper.
It's becasue I dont like angre.

>> It's because I don't like being angry.