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박수혜/2024-04-15

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Actually I don’t like cook at home well so there are just a few dishes I can make. one of my favorite home-cooked is sea mustard soup(미역국). One day I wanted to make it for my family birthday and I leaned to make about it. So that’s why I can make Sea mustard soup. It’s so easy cook and useful to who I like peoples birthday you know.. so I like it :)

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Su,

I think I've tasted sea mustard soup before, and I liked it. It was a pre-made pack though so, I'm not sure if it tastes the same when cooked from scratch.

-Teacher Ash

Actually I don’t like cook at home well so there are just a few dishes I can make.

>> Actually, I don't like to cook so there are just a few dishes that I can make.

one of my favorite home-cooked is sea mustard soup(미역국).

>> One of my favorite home-cooked dishes is sea mustard soup (미역국).

One day I wanted to make it for my family birthday and I leaned to make about it.

>> I want to cook one for my family on their birthday. So, I learned how to cook it.

So that’s why I can make Sea mustard soup.

>> So, that is why I can make sea mustard soup.

It’s so easy cook and useful to who I like peoples birthday you know.. so I like it :)

>>It is so easy to cook, and it is also advantageous because you can cook it for people you know especially on their birthdays. That is why I like it.