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What do you think are the most dangerous mythical creatures? Why do you think are dangerous?

박준현/2024-04-15

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I think the most dangerous mythical creatures are Dragon. I think that the Dragon because the Dragon is scary and it shoots the fire. And also the Dragon's voice is very loud and itbreak down the bildings. And the Korean peoples think the Dragon is protecting us. What and it can do you think are the most dangerous mythical creatures? And why? This is the I think most dangerous mythical creatures. And these are the reasons why the Dragon is dangerous.

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Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille

I think the most dangerous mythical creatures are Dragon.

>> I think the most dangerous mythical creatures are dragons.

I think that the Dragon because the Dragon is scary and it shoots the fire.

>> I think the dragon is the most dangerous one because it's scary, and it shoots fire.

And also the Dragon's voice is very loud and itbreak down the bildings.

>> And also, a dragon's voice is so loud that it can break down the buildings.

And the Korean peoples think the Dragon is protecting us.

>> Koreans think a dragon is protecting us.

What and it can do you think are the most dangerous mythical creatures?

>> What do you think are the most dangerous mythical creatures?

And why?

>> Why do you think so?

This is the I think most dangerous mythical creatures.

>> This is my idea about the most dangerous mythical creatures.

And these are the reasons why the dragon is dangerous.

>> CORRECT!