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What is the essence of flower festivals in your country?

이진태/2024-04-15

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Korean flower festivals are almost for cherry blossom. Cherry blossom's color is white and pink and light red. Korean think that the spring is begin when the cherry blossom bloom.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Het JT! Thank you for sharing about the flower festival in your country. I hope I get to hear more about this in our class.
~~Teacher Ryka^^

Korean flower festivals are almost for cherry blossom.
>>The Korean flower festivals mainly focus on cherry blossoms.

Cherry blossom's color is white and pink and light red.
>>Cherry blossoms come in shades of white, pink, and light red.

Korean think that the spring is begin when the cherry blossom bloom.
>>Koreans consider spring to begin with the blooming of cherry blossoms.
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