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Do you have any favorite springtime activities from your childhood?

이진태/2024-04-15

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When I was younger, I didn't like flowers, however I have liked flowers since some time ago. Seeing flower is famous springtime activities. These days I have went to see a flowers like a cherry blossom every spring.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey JT! I would agree on you on this part. Most people do enjoy the cherry blossoms especially during spring.
~~Teacher Ryka^^


When I was younger, I didn't like flowers, however I have liked flowers since some time ago.
>>When I was younger, I didn't like flowers, but I've come to appreciate them recently.

Seeing flower is famous springtime activities.
>>Viewing flowers is a popular springtime activity.

These days I have went to see a flowers like a cherry blossom every spring.
>>These days, I make it a point to see flowers like cherry blossoms every spring.
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