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Where do you want to be seated in a restaurant, a smoking or a non-smoking area?

맹준영/2024-04-08

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I want non-smoking zone. because I didn't smoke and i won't in future. Smoke is so bad to health and has so many bad substances. In korea, Almost area is Non-smoking area. Increasing non-smoking area is so good policy. And increasing price of the smoke is so important thing that reduce the people who smoke.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Jun! Thank you so much for doing your homework. You did a wonderful job. Please take note of the corrections I made on your sentences. Keep it up and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia

I want non-smoking zone. because I didn't smoke and i won't in future.

>> I want a non-smoking zone because I don't smoke and won't in the future.

Smoke is so bad to health and has so many bad substances.

>> Correct

In korea, Almost area is Non-smoking area.

>> In Korea, almost every area is a non-smoking area.

Increasing non-smoking area is so good policy.

>> Increasing the non-smoking area is such a good policy.

And increasing price of the smoke is so important thing that reduce the people who smoke.

>> Increasing the price of cigarettes is an important measure to reduce the number of people who smoke.