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장지혁/2024-04-08

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think Internet should not be banned from schools because Internet can make class smoothly. Teacher can use Internet to show pictures or videos.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Henry!

It definitely helps to make classes more engaging and informative. Good job!

~ Teacher Maxine

I think Internet should not be banned from schools because Internet can make class smoothly.

>> I think the Internet should not be banned from schools because it can make classes run smoothly.

Teacher can use Internet to show pictures or videos.

>> Teachers can use the Internet to show pictures or videos.