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What sort of fashion do you like? Why?

차진혁/2024-04-07

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I like traditional fashion of all countries. I think there unique and so nice. I especially want to wear indias clothes.
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Here's your corrected composition from last Friday's homework, Jimmy! 

Please take a look at the corrections written below. Enjoy the rest of your evening! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                            What sort of fashion do you like? Why?



I like traditional fashion of all countries.
>> I like the traditional fashion of all countries.

I think there unique and so nice.
>> I think they're unique and so nice.

I especially want to wear indias clothes.
>> I especially want to wear Indian clothes.

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