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Where were you yesterday? What did you do?

최지한/2024-04-07

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I went to my school. And played badminton with my friends, and went to my English academy.

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Hello Ji Han,
Thank you for doing your homework. Have a nice day!

I went to my school. And played badminton with my friends, and went to my English academy.
>> I went to school, played badminton with my friends then went to my English academy.